Hi there welcome to my blog my name is Hayley and I am 10 years old i love gymnastics,dogs,singing and my fav colours are mint blue and sunny yellow i have short golden hair and my bestie is aria and adele they love gymnastics as well!!! how do you like my photo?aria why did you photo bomb me? see yha
Hi Hayley.
ReplyDeleteDo you remember that one of the rules is that you save our posts with TBC in the title so I could check them? This is because there are some things that make your post not quite ready for the World to see.
Can you fix them please:
1. It is hard to read the text. Try making it white and larger.
2. There are not really many sentences with capitals and full stops. Using editing eyes will sort this.
3. The purpose of this post was to share the blogging rules and I can't see them. Please list 3-4 rules we talked about for blog safety.
I am excited about what you can achieve on your blog but you need to follow the instructions in a session please.
Whaea Allana
Hi Hayley.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! next time please remember your capital I's :) Eva
Well done on making your changes Hayley. The nest challenge is to go back in and give each proper noun a capital - that is all the names of people.
ReplyDeleteWhaea Allana
Hi Hayley
ReplyDeleteI like how you got aria in the photo too. Next time try not to put white around the writing it makes it hard to read!
From Adele